I just finished reading your script and I think you did a FANTASTIC job with it. I appreciate the nuances you captured of the ecosystem of a family with an...

This is a highly effective script with a solid plot and deep, rich characters. The choice to spend a small but significant amount of time exploring Cliff's own story and...

Your character descriptions are well done. We know who Johanna and Amber are before they even speak. Amber's trauma and how it informs her interaction with Johanna is well done....

This is an incredibly strong script. The title page notes that this is your 36th draft, and that shows in the best way. It's admirable to stick with a script...

There’s so much more energy and pop in the musical moments, which is how it should be, but especially in comparison to Johanna’s darker home life. The added element of...