This is an incredibly strong script. The title page notes that this is your 36th draft, and that shows in the best way. It’s admirable to stick with a script through so many revisions and paid off tremendously. No moments feel wasted here, and each little detail in every scene either reinforces a character’s personality traits or sets something up for later. The best example of this is when Amber tells Johanna to stop apologizing so much in the first act; this shows that Johanna is used to being submissive and assumes herself in the wrong regardless of the situation. This foreshadows her confrontations with her father later in the film.